Making my writing more Emphatic

To make my writing more emphatic and/or more "expressive", I have to first have an understanding of what my topic is. I then have to find good points to make and why I chose those points to put into my paper. Instead of putting all of my good points that I have in the beginning, I should put them at the end so I can have a strong ending to my papers. Staying on topic could also make my papers more emphatic, because when your point isn't clear to the reader, it throws them off a bit. I have had some issues with getting off topic but I honestly can connect whatever I'm talking about to my main point, it just doesn't read that way.